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the secrets of darcy and elizabeth

Source: Review copy from author
Rating: ★★★★☆

“She seemed fairly happy a moment ago,” Richard observed.

“Yes, but that could be because she was happy to see you,” Darcy said with a note of despair in his voice.  “I am certain I remain the last man in the world she would marry.”

“Maybe you have moved up the ladder a few rungs.  Perhaps she would now consider marrying you before, say, the butcher.”  Richard grinned broadly.

“Darcy grimaced.  “Great encouragement indeed.  I thank you.”

(from The Secrets of Darcy and Elizabeth)

In The Secrets of Darcy and Elizabeth, Victoria Kincaid brings Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice to Paris at a time when England and France are at peace, and no one knows how long it will last.  Mr. Darcy spends much of his time drowning his sorrows in drink and contemplating the harsh but true comments Elizabeth Bennet made in rejecting his insulting proposal at Hunsford.  His cousin, Colonel Fitzwilliam, convinces him that a trip to Paris is just the thing to cure his broken heart — except that almost immediately, he bumps into Elizabeth, who is traveling with her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner.

Having read Mr. Darcy’s letter, Elizabeth has softened toward him, and Mr. Darcy realizes he has been given a second chance to prove himself worthy of her love.  But just as the pair begin to put their past misunderstandings behind them, war breaks out once more, and it won’t be long before Napoleon orders the arrest of any Englishman found on French soil.  English tourists must quickly evacuate Paris and get to the coast.

With Elizabeth’s aunt and uncle elsewhere in the country on business, Mr. Darcy just can’t leave her to fend for herself as chaos and danger erupt around them.  All the carriages have been rented, so they have no choice but to overlook the rules of propriety and flee Paris in a curricle, which seats only two — meaning that Elizabeth’s chaperone must be left behind.  Being alone with Mr. Darcy, even in a time of war when she had little choice, could be disastrous to Elizabeth’s reputation, but when she falls deathly ill before they reach the coast, Mr. Darcy gives no thought to their compromising position — only that she must get well.

Kincaid throws many obstacles in their path.  Getting to England is no easy feat, but having to conceal a secret from their time in France from their family and closest friends proves to be even harder.  With Mr. Darcy pitted against another aunt who gives Lady Catherine a run for her money and Elizabeth trying to evade the attentions of a suitor even more persistent and ridiculous than Mr. Collins, it seems that a happily ever after may be too far out of their grasp.

The Secrets of Darcy and Elizabeth is an exciting, humorous, and sweet tale.  Dropping Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth in Paris in such a tumultuous time in history is a unique touch, as I had no idea how that aspect of the story would play out.  It also highlights the customs of the time, especially when it came to proper behavior among unmarried couples.  Just being alone together was enough to tarnish a woman’s reputation, never mind being caught in an embrace.  Meanwhile, Kincaid injects a lot of humor into the novel, from the clueless Mr. Fenton and the playful banter between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth to the difficulty the couple has in keeping their secret.  The romance is front and center here, but Kincaid, thankfully, leaves much to the imagination.

Although some of the situations Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth encountered, along with their behavior, were a bit over the top, The Secrets of Darcy and Elizabeth was thoroughly entertaining.  Our hero and heroine were completely likeable, and the villains were even more deliciously villainous.  It was nice to see Mr. Bennet all riled up and Caroline Bingley left speechless.  I spent a couple of delightful afternoons with this novel, and I can’t wait to see what Kincaid writes next.

Disclosure: I received The Secrets of Darcy and Elizabeth from the author for review.

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stronger even than pride

Source: Review copy from Meryton Press
Rating: ★★★★☆

“And you may be assured that nothing in the world would have induced me to share my intimate concerns with you had I realised your true opinion of my character.”

“I have never made a secret of my opinion of your character, Mr. Darcy, but whatever your concerns, they are of no interest to me.  Please let me be on my way, and do not attempt to continue this very inappropriate line of conversation.  I am married, and happily so, to Mr. Wickham.”

(from Stronger Even Than Pride, page 44)

Stronger Even Than Pride is not a charming, mostly lighthearted retelling of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice.  Gail McEwen writes about an Elizabeth Bennet who refuses to read the letter in which Mr. Darcy explains everything about Mr. Wickham, and this seemingly small change sets in motion a series of dark events that will leave the Austen purists running for the hills.

Soon after rejecting Mr. Darcy’s proposal and returning to Hertfordshire, Elizabeth is reunited with Mr. Wickham, and because she so foolishly discarded Mr. Darcy’s letter, she agrees to marry him.  The engagement is opposed by her parents, and even Mrs. Bennet — who wants nothing but to marry off her daughters — thinks it’s a mistake.  But the headstrong Elizabeth marches off to Scotland and becomes Mrs. Wickham.

Of course, Mr. Darcy is angry, but that’s partly because he assumes she read his letter and chose to marry the scoundrel anyway.  It’s not long before Wickham’s true colors start to show, and even his desire to possess Elizabeth in a way Darcy never can is not enough to keep him at home.  Elizabeth, feeling used and abused and struggling in poverty, has no one to turn to; she can’t go home and must live with the consequences of her actions.

Meanwhile, Mr. Darcy still loves Elizabeth but is helpless to do much to improve her situation.  When scandal envelopes the Wickhams and threatens even Georgiana Darcy’s happiness, all hope seems lost.  Of all the obstacles to throw in the path toward Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy’s happily ever after, this is the one that could keep them apart forever.

I’m not an Austen purist; the more unique, the better for me.  But Stronger Even Than Pride was almost too difficult for me to take.  I must admit I almost abandoned the book on page 48, after a particularly graphic sex scene involving Elizabeth, Mr. Wickham, and his fantasies of the jealous Mr. Darcy watching them together.  Truly, that scene — coupled with an earlier scene involving Mr. Darcy and a prostitute — made me ill.  I have no problem with shaking the plot up a bit, but I didn’t need to “see” that.  Sometimes implying what’s going on is enough.

However, I made myself keep reading because I had to know how things would turn out for Elizabeth and Darcy.  Of course, having read so may of these Austen adaptations, I was confident there would be a happy ending, but I couldn’t see a way out for these characters.  I’m happy to say that McEwen didn’t disappoint, and I clung to every word until the very end.

Stronger Even Than Pride is well written and well worth the initial discomfort.  Even when I thought I couldn’t continue reading, I admired McEwen’s bravery in taking the story to a place I never imagined.  I keep saying that Pride and Prejudice retellings need to be unique to keep my attention these days, and McEwen certainly delivered on that front.  She shows that there are countless ways to re-imagine these characters and their circumstances, and taking them down a messy, thorn-covered path that is seemingly impossible to traverse certainly grabbed my attention.  It’s definitely not a book for all fans of the Austenesque, but the character evolution, the intense emotion, the complicated relationships, and the promise of love and redemption make it worth giving a try.

Disclosure: I received Stronger Even Than Pride from Meryton Press for review.

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pride, prejudice and cheese grits

Source: Review copy from Howard Books
Rating: ★★★★☆

“I guess I’m like Darcy then, not really able to make small talk.”  Shelby set the coffeemaker for the morning.  “That’s it!  I’m Darcy and I just need to find my Elizabeth.”

“My friend, you couldn’t handle Elizabeth.”  Rebecca laughed.

(from Pride, Prejudice and Cheese Grits, page 27)

Pride, Prejudice and Cheese Grits is the first book in Mary Jane Hathaway’s Jane Austen Takes the South series and is a modern-day retelling of Pride and Prejudice set at a small college in Mississippi.  Shelby Roswell is Hathaway’s Elizabeth Bennet, a professor and Civil War expert struggling to achieve tenure — a process that has been complicated by a scathing review of her new book by well-known historian and Yale professor Ransom Fielding.  Ransom, our Mr. Darcy, comes back home to teach for a year at Shelby’s college, and Shelby’s quick temper means she makes a really bad first impression when she interrupts one of his classes and criticizes his method of handling students.

Shelby has some family issues to deal with, not the least being her mother’s preoccupation with marrying her off, and spends much of her time trying to piece together a mystery for an article she is writing.  Her mother’s horrid attempt at matchmaking puts her in the sights of David Bishop, a shady real estate agent who is a cross between Mr. Collins and Mr. Wickham.  Meanwhile, Ransom begins to see Shelby in a new light, even as he bears the weight of the guilt he feels over his wife’s death.  Just as Shelby starts to question her perceptions of Ransom, the Caroline Bingley-esque Tasha comes to town and stirs up all sorts of confusion.

Setting the novel on a college campus and infusing it with Civil War history and southern culture makes for a unique retelling.  Best of all, it’s a very loose retelling, so I didn’t know exactly how each plot thread would play out.  Some readers may be put off by the fact that it’s a Christian romance, but I didn’t find it too preachy, since Shelby’s faith is an integral part of her character.  Because it’s a Christian romance, it doesn’t get too steamy, but one aspect of the story takes a more mature (but not graphic) turn.

Hathaway’s take on Pride and Prejudice is fresh, fun, and funny — a comfort read complete with a couple of comfort-food recipes at the end.  I love how Shelby and Ransom are so like Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy and how Hathaway takes other characters from the original novel and combines them, with Shelby’s best friend, Rebecca, being a cross between Elizabeth’s sister, Jane, and best friend, Charlotte Lucas.  The book shows how Austen’s characters and plots so perfectly stand the test of time.  The next books in the series — also with cute titles — take on Emma (Emma, Mr. Knightley and Chili-Slaw Dogs) and Persuasion (Persuasion, Captain Wentworth and Cracklin’ Cornbread), and I can’t wait to get my hands on them.

Disclosure: I received Pride, Prejudice and Cheese Grits from Howard Books for review.

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miss darcy decides

Source: Review copy from Historical Fiction Virtual Book Tours
Rating: ★★★☆☆

Lizzy handed Georgiana the book.  She fingered the cover, opened to the first page.

“A new story holds promise.”  Lizzy’s tone reflected the anticipation of discovery.

Georgiana studied the words on the page.  “All new endeavors do.”  Georgiana smiled for a moment.  But sometimes the promise was betrayed.

(from Miss Darcy Decides)

Miss Darcy Decides is the second novella in the Love at Pemberley series, and a sequel to Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice that can be read as a standalone book.  The novella focuses on Georgiana Darcy, who is grateful to have escaped the clutches of George Wickham but a little lonely in the midst of so many newly married couples.  She sees the happiness between her brother and Elizabeth as they await the birth of their first child and the love between Kitty Bennet and Colonel Fitzwilliam.  Even her cousin Anne de Bourgh has found love.

Georgiana questions whether she could leave her home and all the memories of her parents, until she meets Sir Camden Sutton.  The attraction between the two is immediate, but Sir Camden has a reputation for being a rouge, and Mr. Darcy is none too pleased about the looks passing between them.  Sir Camden has endured the loss of everyone important to him, and the grief caused him to make some bad decisions.  He says he is a new man, and Georgiana believes he is sincere.  But why is he so intent on helping the unmarried, pregnant niece of Mrs. Wilton, a close friend of the Darcy’s housekeeper?

Miss Darcy Decides is a quiet, sweet love story and an enjoyable way to spend a couple of hours.  It’s nice to see Georgiana as the main character, especially when there are plenty of amusing encounters with the overprotective Mr. Darcy.  Georgiana has learned a lot from her near elopement with Wickham, so she is cautious where Sir Camden is concerned.

However, being a novella means there is only a little bit of tension and not as much character and plot development.  I would have enjoyed more details about Sir Camden and his past and a few more obstacles in his path to winning over both Mr. Darcy and Georgiana.  Still, Miss Darcy Decides is a charming take on a character who sits in the shadows in the original Austen novel.  Now I’m curious to read the first novella in the series, Most Truly, to see how Kitty ends up with Colonel Fitzwilliam and the third installment, Miss Bennet Blooms, to see how Mary Bennet finds her happily ever after.

Thanks to Amy of Historical Fiction Virtual Book Tours for having me on the tour for Miss Darcy Decides.  Click the image below for more information about the book and to follow the tour.

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pride and persistence

Source: Review copy from the author
Rating: ★★★★☆

(This review first appeared on Indie Jane.)

Finally, Darcy yelled out, “What are you talking about!  I never proposed two days ago!  A man would remember that!”

At that moment, it hit Elizabeth; he didn’t remember the proposal.  She looked at his face and saw beads of sweat forming on his brow.  He was obviously quite irate.  She was dumfounded.  She didn’t know what to do.  Not only had she agitated him, but she had hurt him once again.  Once again, he had his hand at his chest.  Once again, she had not held her tongue.  Once again, she had been rude and unforgiveable in her refusal.  Not only had she not apologized, she had repeated the same mistake.

(from Pride and Persistence, page 52)

A retelling of Pride and Prejudice must be really unique to grab my attention these days, and fortunately, Jeanna Ellsworth’s latest novel, Pride and Persistence fits the bill. Ellsworth picks up the story after Elizabeth Bennet refuses Mr. Darcy’s disastrous proposal. Right after delivering the letter that explains his role in separating Elizabeth’s sister, Jane, from Mr. Bingley and reveals Wickham’s true character, Mr. Darcy is injured in an accident with his horse. Elizabeth witnesses the accident and plays an instrumental role in saving his life.

Mr. Darcy is too injured to be moved from the Hunsford parsonage, where Elizabeth is staying with her friend, Charlotte, and the odious Mr. Collins. Feeling guilty about the harsh words she said to him in rejecting his proposal, Elizabeth agrees to read to the unconscious Darcy, who is calmed by her presence. It’s soon obvious that his memory has quite literally taken a hit, as he does not recall the accident or his previous proposal and subsequent rejection — and proceeds to propose again, with the same arrogance…and the same result.

This latest refusal causes a setback in Darcy’s condition, so Colonel Fitzwilliam — with the help of the local doctor, Mr. Cummings, and Darcy’s nurse, Madeline — convinces Elizabeth not to reject him outright if he proposes again, in the hopes that he will continue to recover and eventually remember what happened before the accident on his own. Watching Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy navigate the challenges of his memory loss makes for a hilarious and sweet take on Jane Austen’s beloved novel.

Ellsworth brilliantly works in several original characters, my favorite being Mrs. Wilkinson, the Collins’ horrible cook and Elizabeth’s new friend and confidante. She also expands on the secondary characters, and I couldn’t help but chuckle at Colonel Fitzwilliam’s efforts to outwit Lady Catherine — who is hellbent on Darcy marrying her daughter — using battlefield tactics.

Pride and Persistence is definitely a story of, well, persistence, and Ellsworth’s humor makes it a must-read for fans of the Austenesque. If you didn’t think Mr. Collins could be more repulsive, think again. If you never imagined Lady Catherine having deep, dark secrets, then you’ll be gasping and laughing at the same time. Ellsworth’s retelling of Pride and Prejudice is fresh, imaginative, fun, and especially difficult to put down.

Disclosure: I received Pride and Persistence from the author for review.

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haunting mr. darcy

Source: Review copy from Meryton Press
Rating: ★★★★☆

“This will not do, Miss Bennet.  You are not real, and the sooner I can convince myself of that fact, the sooner I will be free of this lunacy.”

Elizabeth shook her head, her tears forgotten in renewed exasperation at the gentleman.  She ventured to look at him then.  He sat with an air of feigned calm, one hand cupping his jaw, his fingers covering his mouth as he spoke.  It was all quite distracting.

“Sir, I assure you.  I am as real as you are.”  Her brows lowered as she considered her strange new abilities.  “At least, I think I am,” she whispered to herself.

(from Haunting Mr. Darcy, page 51)

KaraLynne Mackrory’s latest novel, Haunting Mr. Darcy, is a humorous, delightfully sweet retelling of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice.  Elizabeth Bennet, in a coma after a carriage accident, finds her spirit has been transported to a library, where slipping a hand through a book enables her to immediately absorb its contents.  She thinks she’s having a splendid dream, until she realizes she’s in the London home of the disagreeable Mr. Darcy.

When Mr. Darcy sees Elizabeth in spirit form, he thinks he’s going mad.  He was entranced by her back in Hertfordshire, and knowing that a match between them would be unsuitable, he has been trying hard to forget her ever since.  But Elizabeth is somehow tethered to him and cannot leave his side, and it’s not long before Mr. Darcy’s family and servants notice his odd behavior, mainly that he is talking and laughing to himself.  Meanwhile, back at Longbourn, Elizabeth’s family keeps vigil at her bedside.

Haunting Mr. Darcy definitely is “a spirited courtship.”  With Elizabeth’s ghost being dragged along with him everywhere, even his bedchamber, distracting him at every turn, there are plenty of funny moments to brighten what otherwise could be a dark tale.  Mackrory uses Colonel Fitzwilliam to lighten the mood and prompt Mr. Darcy to act when all seems lost, and even Lydia Bennet’s story takes an unexpected turn.  I especially loved the references to Persuasion, which is another of my favorite Austen novels.

Readers of these retellings obviously expect a happily ever after, and I loved that I had no idea how Mackrory would get Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth to that ending.  I was intrigued by the prospect of a Pride and Prejudice ghost story of sorts, and I wasn’t disappointed.  Haunting Mr. Darcy is among the most unique retellings I’ve come across so far, throwing Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth together at their weakest, removing the confines of society’s rules, and letting love take its course, complete with a believable paranormal twist.

Disclosure: I received Haunting Mr. Darcy from Meryton Press for review.

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the secret betrothal

Source: Review copy from Meryton Press
Rating: ★★★★☆

He does not dare to kiss me, her mind screamed silently, but why am I trembling?  She felt a flutter in the pit of her stomach and could not keep her eyelids from blinking over and over.  He is actually going to kiss me!

Very close to her face and audible only to her ear, Mr. Darcy said, “When I kiss you, Miss Bennet, I will not need the inducement of mistletoe.”  He then touched his lips to her hand, released it, and walked out the door.

The colour drained from Elizabeth’s face as she made her way across the room to the perimeter of the hall.  Her knees suddenly felt quite weak, and she sank down upon a chair, aware that her breathing had grown shallow and ragged.  When he kisses me?  The gall of that man!  That is one thing that will never happen!

(from The Secret Betrothal, page 48)

Jan Hahn’s latest take on Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice puts an even bigger obstacle than usual in the path to Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy’s happily ever after.  The last time I read Pride and Prejudice a couple of years ago, I remember being really surprised by how much Elizabeth likes Mr. Wickham and falls for his charms.  I think I like to put that out of my mind, but in The Secret Betrothal, Hahn expands on that attraction and kept me cringing and wanting to not believe what I was reading even while making it hard for me to put the book down.

The Secret Betrothal shows what might have happened had Mr. Wickham really, really wanted to punish Mr. Darcy and persuaded Elizabeth to become engaged to him, then keep that engagement a secret, even from her dear sister Jane.  Hahn surprisingly makes this scenario believable, however repulsive it is to imagine Elizabeth linked to that horrid scoundrel.  In fact, the only thing I didn’t like about this book was that I was able to believe it, so kudos to Hahn for that!

There were so many things I liked about this novel, from Hahn’s courage in embroiling the heroine in a secret engagement to the evolution of Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy’s relationship, with confusion, tenderness, passion, and the realization that nothing can keep these characters apart for long.  Hahn lets readers spend more time with Charlotte in this rendition and even inserts some humor in the form of Lady Catherine’s spring tonic.  (Seriously, it’s hilarious!)  But the freshness of the story is really where this novel shines.  I loved that Hahn took the main characters to Brighton and let the story unfold by the sea.

Hahn dedicates the novel to “anyone who has chosen unwisely the first time,” and The Secret Betrothal certainly is a story where that is the case.  Elizabeth has even more to chastise herself about in this retelling, not only for falling prey to a scoundrel but also for risking her reputation.  It’s a novel that highlights the flaws that make Austen’s heroes and heroines so endearing, so life-like, and it also shows that there is no end to the possibilities for these characters.

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Disclosure: I received The Secret Betrothal from Meryton Press for review.

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persuasion tearoom chat My tearoom chat with Serena about Jane Austen’s Persuasion concludes this week with our discussion of Volume II, Chapters 7-12. Grab a cup of tea and head over to Savvy Verse & Wit to join the discussion.

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persuasion tearoom chatPour a cup of tea, and join me and Serena for a leisurely discussion of Persuasion by Jane Austen. This week, our chat was held over a cup of Orange Passion Fruit Jasmine tea (me) and an Arnold Palmer (Serena)

Today’s discussion covers Volume II, Chapters 1-6. If you’re reading along with us, great! If you’ve read the book before and want to chime in, great! Please share your thoughts and questions in the comments.

Anna: So much happens in these six chapters. Anne leaves Uppercross to stay with Lady Russell, then heads to Bath. But what I find most striking about this section is the change in Anne. The improvement to her person is mentioned by both Lady Russell and even Sir Walter. There’s a hint that Captain Benwick may be interested in her, as well as Mr. Elliot. Do you think it’s safe to say that Anne is not as isolated as she was at the very beginning of the novel?

Serena: I think we see in these six chapters a change that even her self-absorbed relatives can see. She’s no longer wilted and in the background, but regaining some of the blush of her youth (my gosh, she’s only 27 or so). I think the glances of Mr. Elliot in the inn, the looks of gentlemen on the Cobb, and the attentions of Captain Benwick have restored her faith in her own worth as a person. Whether that means she’s better for it; I’m not sure. Should her self-worth be tied to what others perceive in her, or should it be something more internal?

I think she’s become more sociable as a result of being with the Musgroves and because of the Harvilles, et. al., but I also think seeing that Captain Wentworth is the same and no worse for her rejection, that she is feeling less guilty about how she was persuaded to break their engagement.

What are your thoughts about her as an Austen heroine, thus far? Do you find her to be one of the weaker ones?

Anna: Even if Anne keeps her composure when her family is so rude to her, it has to bother her. Yet, she remains strong and holds her ground where she can. She visits Mrs. Smith instead of Lady Dalrymple. Even though she’s tempted by the thought of returning to her home and taking her mother’s place as Lady Elliot, her good sense and suspicions of Mr. Elliot win out.

I don’t think of Anne as a weak heroine at all. (I wonder if I’ll say the same thing about Fanny Price when I re-read Mansfield Park at some point; she’s the one I’m not crazy about.) She may have been pushed to the background by her family and lost so much by breaking her engagement to Captain Wentworth, but she bears all of the burdens her family put on her with grace and dignity and strength. How she handled the whole Wentworth/Louisa thing, despite the pain it caused her, is admirable. Yet at the same time, Austen doesn’t portray her as too perfect.

What do you think?

Serena: I don’t think she’s weak, but she is definitely more subdued than say — Emma or Lizzy — in how she comports herself in front of family and others.

I did love seeing Anne stand up to her father and sister by seeing Mrs. Smith, rather than Lady Dalrymple, and while she sees Mr. Elliot as perfect in manners, she also realizes that there is something too good to be true there.

I haven’t read Mansfield Park in ages, but I don’t think Anne is as weak as she is. I find her to have a quiet strength, which is nice, but it also makes it easier for others to push her into the background.

I did note that some of Austen’s humor is lost in this one, except for the exchange between Anne and Mr. Croft about the number of mirrors in her father’s old room at Kellynch Hall. Are there other areas of her humor that I missed in this section?

the annoted persuasionAnna: There’s not as much humor in this novel, but there definitely are some humorous scenes and lines. I always crack up when Sir Walter asks how Mary is because she had a red nose last time he saw her. Admiral Croft’s going on about that painting of a poorly done ship made me chuckle. And that letter from Mary…well, Mary is pretty much ridiculous all the time.

What did you think of Louisa’s engagement to Captain Benwick?

Serena: Louisa’s engagement seems to be this random thing that comes out of nowhere, but I think the circumstances of being in such close contact all that time and they being their respective captive audiences may have helped them along. There really is no way to tell what transpired between them.

I do love that Mary is so happy to relay the news and that it’s so out of the blue, but her letters are just hilarious…especially since she contradicts herself at every turn. And Mr. Croft certainly does have a love for ships and the sea..it’s a wonder he ever set foot on shore.

Now what about Anne’s boldness in acting about Captain Wentworth, do you think she’s hoping that there will be a renewal of their acquaintance, or do you think she’s merely concerned because she has loved him in the past (and still does) even if they do not renew a friendship at the very least?

Anna: It definitely seems random to us readers because we’re not privy to the goings-on in Lyme. Louisa and Benwick’s romance would make for an interesting spin-off novel.

Of course, we knew something would happen with Louisa because she CANNOT end up with Captain Wentworth. She just can’t. I think I’d be okay with her marrying anyone but him, because the Elliots and the Musgroves being so connected would’ve really made that hard for Anne to handle, I think.

I do love that Anne was able to feel “senseless joy” when she learned the news. Being Anne, she seems concerned about how the engagement affected Wentworth and Benwick’s friendship. But whether she feels hope for a second chance or just joy that she doesn’t have to see him married to Louisa, or just joy that he’ll remain single for the time being, I don’t know.

Going back to Mr. Elliot. I was struck by the passage where Anne considers how everything he says is measured and how occasional slips of the tongue are more sincere and authentic. That made me wonder whether Anne and Emma could have ever been friends. What do you think?

Serena: I agree, Louisa and Benwick’s romance would be an interesting spin-off. Perhaps you should write that one!

Yes, I agree if Captain Wentworth and Louisa married, I don’t think Anne could have handled it, though I’m not really sure how she would have reacted to seeing them together all the time.

I did love that he said she experienced a senseless joy — that made her more human to me. Until that point, I felt like her emotions were too in check all the time. I was elated for her. Even if she doesn’t hold out hope for her and Wentworth to get back together, it was nice to see that she could be happy even senselessly.

I’m not sure if Emma would have wanted Anne for a friend — though except maybe to fix her up — but Anne would have enjoyed Emma’s company. That passage also makes me wonder about what Austen is trying to say about her own society — did it seem to stilted and measured to her? was she looking for more?

And does Anne mean that those who are measured in their thinking and speech are maybe more callous and calculating than they are perceived to be by others who simply find them delightful in manner?

persuasionAnna: I see what you mean about Anne’s emotions being too in check. Though I felt some of her frustrations being let out through the narrative describing her being pulled to and fro by Mary and the Musgroves wanting her to solve their problems with one another back in the last section, and it also shows when she compares the happy household of the Musgroves to the more stilted atmosphere at Kellynch.

I wonder if an Emma/Anne pairing would be somewhat like an Elizabeth/Charlotte friendship, a balance of the practical with the lively, though without Mr. Collins, of course. Given that Austen thought Emma was a heroine only she would like, I imagine that she herself would prefer a less stilted atmosphere. Emma is someone who comes out and says what everyone else is thinking.

I think Mr. Elliot’s manner of speech is delightful to people like Lady Russell because they are so focused on manners and social standing, whereas Anne is looking for some real conversation and companionship because all that matters to her to a lesser extent.

What do you think about Mrs. Smith and her importance to the plot? Do you think there’s more to her story as well? You sort of see that her story will intersect with that of Anne’s family, given her nurse’s connection to the wife of Mr. Elliot’s friend.

Serena: Agreed, an Emma/Anne pairing in friendship would be a balancing act of sorts.

I do think there is more to Mrs. Smith’s story, and I think that she is the cautionary tale for Anne who could have been swept up in a marriage — one not with Wentworth, but someone like him — and been left with nothing. While Austen wants us to believe in a happily ever after for Anne, she also wants to remind us that anything could happen and that she should be prepared for the worst. In Anne’s case, though, I think she’s well prepared given how little her family cares for her or her opinions, etc.

Yes, I think that was on purpose…Austen wants us to see the caution in believing in happily ever after, but she also wants to provide a way through which Anne can have it and not fall into a bad situation unwittingly, especially since she’s mostly relied on Lady Russell’s advice in love.

Now, here’s an idea for a spin-off: Anne’s life when she knew Mrs. Smith before her marriage took her off.

What do you think about Mr. Elliot’s paying attention to Anne rather than her sister? Do you think that her sister has noticed? And what is with Mrs. Clay and her hanging on even when it would be more polite to remove herself?

Anna: I know Mrs. Smith’s story from reading the book before, so I’m going to keep quiet about it for you. It definitely is a cautionary tale in a way. I wonder if there is a book out there about Mrs. Smith? You never know!

Mrs. Clay is a very interesting character because at this point, we don’t hear too much of her. There was all that flattery at the beginning and now she’s just there, with the speculation being that she wants to become Lady Elliot. If she’s desperate to get her claws into Sir Walter (and I’m wondering if her father has anything to do with that, too), she’ll never leave as long as Elizabeth desires her company. I don’t know if Elizabeth notices Mr. Elliot’s interest in Anne at this point, or whether it’s only Lady Russell’s observations so far. But since Elizabeth never found a man worth marrying besides Mr. Elliot, and since she already dislikes Anne, I’m sure she will be none too pleased!

I can’t wait for the last part of the book, even though I don’t want it to be over.

Serena: I don’t know if there is a book about Mrs. Smith or not. There don’t seem to be too many spin-off books of Persuasion. I cannot wait to read the ones that I do have now that I’ve nearly achieved my goal of reading this one.

Mrs. Clay does seem conniving, but she’s not outwardly so, which makes me wonder about what goes on behind the scenes. Why does she want to stay? It doesn’t seem like Sir Walter even cares that much about her being there or not, and he certainly doesn’t pay her that much attention, though maybe no other woman could catch his eye like Lady Elliot did — not sure how that happened when he’s so wrapped up in status and his own distinguished looks.

I cannot wait for the last part of the book either, and I, too, do not want it to end.

We hope you’ll help us continue the discussion in the comments!

Click here if you missed the first discussion on Volume I, Chapters 1-6, and here if you missed last week’s discussion on Volume I, Chapters 7-12. And please join us next Friday, March 28th, at Serena’s blog, Savvy Verse & Wit, to discuss Volume II, Chapters 7-12, which will bring us to the end of the novel. See you there!

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Source: Review copy from Meryton Press
Rating: ★★★★★

Elizabeth had once believed she would rather know a fact, even if it were unwelcome, rather than just speculate, but she wondered now if false hope was not better than no hope at all.

(from Consequences, page 98)

Consequences is a thought-provoking retelling of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice, with two novellas joined together into a novel about the consequences of missed opportunities and how doing just one thing differently can turn everything around.  The first part imagines how Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy’s lives would have played out had she rejected his proposal at Hunsford and then missed running into him later on when she tours Pemberley with her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner.  The second part has Elizabeth, with the help of her best friend, Charlotte, taking a more practical approach to Mr. Darcy’s first proposal, accepting it as a means of saving her family in the event of her father’s death despite her fears of being trapped in an unhappy marriage.

I will not divulge any more of the plot because this is a novel that should be experienced the way I experienced it, not knowing how either journey would play out and going through a roller-coaster of emotions.  I even teared up at one point and had to explain to my husband why I was so sad.  I couldn’t believe an Austen-inspired novel made me cry, but that’s what I loved so much about it.  Odom’s tale felt almost too real at times, as some decisions lead people on a rocky path lined with tragedy, and a bittersweet ending is the most that can be hoped for.  But there also were times when I sighed with relief and cheered on the characters (scenes involving Mr. Darcy and Mr. Collins and Mr. Darcy and Lady Catherine immediately come to mind).

Odom’s take on Pride and Prejudice is thoughtful, emphasizes the complexity of the novel and the many different outcomes that could have occurred, and prompts readers to think about the characters’ motivations, decisions, and ultimate fates in the context of Austen’s time.  Having read a number of Pride and Prejudice retellings, I admire Odom’s courage in taking the characters on at least one journey that many Austen fans might find difficult to imagine for their beloved characters.  For readers who wonder about the proliferation of Austen fiction these days, Consequences really drives home the point that one seemingly small change in the plot can have a dramatic impact on the outcome of the story and highlights why many people are fascinated by all the different ways it could have been told.

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Disclosure: I received Consequences from Meryton Press for review.

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